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Your analysis is not wrong. The UCI/The Tour DeFrance, Lance Armstrong were just as bad. You highlight lots of good issues (including - other people making money off it regardless of who wins, the act of not doping was arguably dangerous, given the exertion levels of the pack, etc). The conclusion of this section is fine I'd also agree with (It is true). But ultimately you fail to provide a framework for analysis. Yo…
Unfortunately, I'm not familiar enough with contemporary doping scandals to offer programmatic advice on what can be done about them, except to say that in my view here too we are probably at the cusp of major shift in a massive historical trend. This trend I suspect will end with 'doping' being considered the norm not only among athletes but among the general population, and the chemicals used will be seen as an gen…
You want to "fix" the problem?...
My own approach is always...
This is pretty common failure avoidance technique.
But it lacks ambition.
Imagine a father or a mother with a newborn infant, "Unfortunately, I'm not familiar enough with...changing nappies" so I just won't bother. The kid cries "You want to "fix" the problem?..." The kid cries. "My own approach is always to fit the solution to the problem in such a way that the optimal outcome (i.e. reduction of abuses in the short and long-term) is achieved." The kid cries.
Is that being a responsible Adult? The kid might ask. I dunno. Not my kid. Anyway, who gives a shit about the kid? The kid is kind of fucking annoying.
Maybe that's just the world we live in.
But the difference between an Adult and a Child, is that the Adult doesn't have the luxury of being the Child.
Somebody has to clean up the Shit.
Maybe the kid has a point?
Good writing should be convincing, certainly, but it should be convincing because you got the right answers, not because you did a good job of arguing.
http://paulgraham.com/essay.html
In other words, the point of thinking is to solve, not to display thought.
Same as for the Harvard students.