I started listening to this article (using a text to speech model) shortly after waking up. I thought it was very heavy on jargon. Like, it was written in a way that makes the author appear very intelligent without necessarily effectively conveying information to the audience. This is something that I've often seen authors do in academic papers, and my one published research paper (not first author) is no exception.…
I am curious -- what would have made it more effective at conveying information to you? Different people learn differently but I wonder how people get beyond the hurdles of jargon.