As a non-native English speaker, I find the omissions of "the" very prominent and interesting in SpaceX speech. "shortly before first stage shutdown", "resulting in loss of mission", "139 seconds into flight", "some period of time following separation", "data to determine root cause" -- is this a general theme in engineering or journalism? I wonder what linguists have to say about this.
Not a linguist but a writer here who loves language. I'm seeing a lot of folks dropping articles. It's also becoming quite common to eliminate pronouns at the beginning of sentences, i.e., instead of "I went down to the store" you write "Went to the store" I use this purposefully to jar the reader. I have no idea what the underlying linguistic reasons are.
You're probably demonstrating this on purpose: your very first sentence is itself an example of dropping a pronoun + verb.