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What's the error? I'd hyphenate "poorly-composed" (most wouldn't these days, but they can go to hell) and I think it's a bit too wordy for what it's communicating, but I don't see what I'd call an actual error. I would personally avoid writing that "poorly composed sentences" have an "affect"—rather than the writer having or presenting an affect, or the sentences' tone being affected —as I find an implied anthropomor…
> What's the error? a) prose doesn't have intentions ... it should be "prose intended to" b) "effect of", not "affect of" > I don't see what I'd call an actual error. That's a serious problem. It's downright weird that you thought he was actually talking about affect (the noun). This is an old conversation ... I won't revisit it.
Oh no, oh lord lmao
I meant "affect" and not "effect." You need to learn what affect means. I'm not asking you to learn about affect theory, but ffs no part of my sentence implied it meant "effect" and not "affect." Ugh. It doesn't even make sense. What would the "effect" of "poorly composed sentences" be? Only affect makes sense there.