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Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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Look, no offence, but this is a terrible poem. It's verbose: > We, the successors of a country and a time where a skinny Black girl descended from slaves and raised by a single mother can dream of becoming president, only to find herself reciting for one. It doesn't make sense. (You can't be the successor of a country, you even more can't be the successor of the present instant happening right now.) It's content-free…

Was gonna try to refute you... but I can't even. It's poetry. Most of us loved it. Especially her delivery of it.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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post #3
post #2

The text, while worth reading, is "incomplete" without her delivery. If you've not seen her speaking it I highly encourage you to do so -- her delivery was absolutely amazing.

As an aside, she apparently has a speech impediment, so had to rehearse the delivery quite a bit. There was a quote from her about how hard it was to rehearse that much while not sounding robotic.

It was an amazing delivery, i never even thought that she could have a speech impediment.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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post #30
post #13

Earlier quoted context omitted.

That's how I understood it

"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defence,[note 1] promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."

More perfect implies imperfection, just less of it.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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post #29

Look, no offence, but this is a terrible poem. It's verbose: > We, the successors of a country and a time where a skinny Black girl descended from slaves and raised by a single mother can dream of becoming president, only to find herself reciting for one. It doesn't make sense. (You can't be the successor of a country, you even more can't be the successor of the present instant happening right now.) It's content-free…

Was gonna try to refute you... but I can't even. It's poetry. Most of us loved it. Especially her delivery of it.

Mmm. Consider it possible that I'm right? Not everything that sounds good stands up in the cold harsh light of criticism. Or as a great poet once put it (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6hzkBihaew): "Do you remember Rick Astley? He had a big fat hit, it was ghastly."

Update: heh, my fastest-downvoted comment. Yup, I'm definitely right.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

#35
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> I think a lot of people are more interesting in helping the half of the country that supported Trump and QAnon walk itself back from the crazy positions they've talked themselves into It's not just the right that has walked itself into crazy positions. The country is in need of some serious regression to the mean on both sides.

"Both sides" nonsense. Show me anything from the left that begins to approach believing that there's a secret cabal of baby-eating satan worshippers running a pedophile ring from the basement of a pizza joint.

Critical Race Theory.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

#36
post #8

Seems like a pretty thinly veiled swipe at Trump to be honest. Really looking forward to the next four years of "Isn't it great how we're all united in the common cause of hating half the country"

> Seems like a pretty thinly veiled swipe at Trump to be honest.

Maybe it was, maybe it wasn't. But if you don't think that guy (not even gonna use his name) deserves some serious criticism after the last 4 years and especially after the events of 1/6/2021... well, I'm just not sure here's any way to reach you.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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post #29

Look, no offence, but this is a terrible poem. It's verbose: > We, the successors of a country and a time where a skinny Black girl descended from slaves and raised by a single mother can dream of becoming president, only to find herself reciting for one. It doesn't make sense. (You can't be the successor of a country, you even more can't be the successor of the present instant happening right now.) It's content-free…

"Art makes you think. Propaganda tells you what to think"

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

#38
post #34

Earlier quoted context omitted.

Was gonna try to refute you... but I can't even. It's poetry. Most of us loved it. Especially her delivery of it.

Mmm. Consider it possible that I'm right? Not everything that sounds good stands up in the cold harsh light of criticism. Or as a great poet once put it ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6hzkBihaew ): "Do you remember Rick Astley? He had a big fat hit, it was ghastly." Update: heh, my fastest-downvoted comment. Yup, I'm definitely right.

No, it's not that you're "right". It's that your techbro-ism is showing. Not a good look.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

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post #3
post #2

The text, while worth reading, is "incomplete" without her delivery. If you've not seen her speaking it I highly encourage you to do so -- her delivery was absolutely amazing.

As an aside, she apparently has a speech impediment, so had to rehearse the delivery quite a bit. There was a quote from her about how hard it was to rehearse that much while not sounding robotic.

It's not much an aside - Biden did, too.

Re: Amanda Gorman's “The Hill We Climb” (Full Text)

#40
post #30
post #13

Earlier quoted context omitted.

That's how I understood it

"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defence,[note 1] promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."

more perfect does not imply 'perfect' is the goal nor should it be.

"More perfect" in this context is effectively "better."

Perfectionism, ironically, stunts improvements.

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