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How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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I'm really sad at how much Latin I've managed to lose since my school days. It's really an incredible language and this stack exchange post shows some of that versatility. Because the words in Latin contain dense grammatical information in their spelling, you can be much more flexible with word order. This gives classical poets the ability to do crazy things with word ordering to create "word pictures" where the stru…

I'm curious about why you've added what I assume are stress marks in the Latin. I studied it (admittedly, a while back) all my way through school and have never once seen this used, including in this poem. In no way a criticism of me trying to make a thing about it - is it an American thing?

Honestly they were just there in the Wikipedia text I copied. I've seen them in more modern texts to help with pronunciations and translation (if I recall correctly some words have different meanings depending on the length of the final vowel but that can normally be determined from context). Romans sometimes used the apex to denote long vowels which would have otherwise been ambiguous but I think it wasn't as commonplace as in textbooks today.

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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You can do something similar with Arabic, I can think of few ways to squeeze it into 4~2 words phrase (variations) without sacrificing clarity

If we open it up to Arabic slang then we can almost compress to 1, right? رَحلِتَك Because we can use the form of the verb that both disparagingly implies "sends you away", in the imperative form to imply what's actually being requested (obedience of repetition). Of course, it's not perfect, but definitely easily doable with 2.

Oh no I was not talking about slangs, this can be like

ودعت كثيرا

قالت وداعا كثيرا

ودعت مرارا

I'm Iraqi but I'm by no means an Arabic expert, I'm pretty sure there is a better way to give a more accurate expression for this in Arabic

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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I realise it's from song lyrics so doesn't have to make sense but this instinctively scans as poor grammar to me. Shouldn't it be "she'd" past tense? Otherwise it's just someone saying "goodbye too many times before" and someone who'd previously said "goodbye" more than is acceptable. ...I'm almost certainly overthinking this but I'd wager that tense error is important when translating to Latin. It's like reading XML…

Doesn’t adding the ‘d change it from past tense to passive voice past tense?

Since several people are not sure about this, I figured an easily skipped little grammar point can't hurt too much.

Passive past would be something like "Goodbye had been said too many times before [by her]"

In active voice, the subject does something to the object.

In passive voice, the object is affected [by the subject]. (I wanted to write "is done something to" instead of "affected", but that feels ugly - the issue with affected is that it is also an adjective; I really mean the past participle here)

The object becomes the subject, and vice versa. The be auxiliary needs to be present. If be is not here, it ain't passive. If be is here… be can be used in active voice so you can't know for sure, but if there's a "by ..." clause, or if adding one feels natural, that a good hint.

The intent of the passive voice is usually to focus on the object or the action, of de-emphasis the subject, of even to drop it because it's not important, it's redundant or even to create some suspense regarding who performed the action.

(English is a second language to me, though what I wrote completely applies to my first language too)

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

#294

I'm really sad at how much Latin I've managed to lose since my school days. It's really an incredible language and this stack exchange post shows some of that versatility. Because the words in Latin contain dense grammatical information in their spelling, you can be much more flexible with word order. This gives classical poets the ability to do crazy things with word ordering to create "word pictures" where the stru…

Incredible post, I really appreciate you taking the time to share.

Are there any resources that you have enjoyed over the years for learning Latin or engaging in material written in Latin?

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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syllable count english 10 - She said goodbye too many times before latin 6 - nimium valedīxit polish 7 - Zbyt często się żegnała german 10 - Sie hat sich schon zu oft verabschiedet french 11 - Elle a dit au revoir trop souvent avant italian 12 - Ha detto addio troppe volte prima portuguese 11 - despedira-se demasiadamente (user tail_exchange) 14 - Ela despediu-se demasiadas vezes antes (deepl) nb: the target sentence…

There is surely multiple alternatives for any given language, similar to Draconis compressing the latin form, in french instead of the literal: 11 - Elle a dit au revoir trop souvent avant You could replace: * "dire au revoir" by "saluer" (which used both for greeting and farewell so you get a bit of data information lost) * "trop souvent" which uses the "trop" adverbe when there is a word for it: "excessivement" Whi…

> Elle a dit au revoir trop souvent

I would go for this one. child comments suggest "tant", but this means "so many times" and not "too many times" (another way to say it would be "si souvent"). Adding "avant" sounds very wrong, but maybe it does in English too, I don't know.

You could use "par le passé": "Elle a dit au revoir trop souvent par le passé". This sounds more natural to me.

> Elle salua excessivement avant

Nice gulf :-) Now, the passé simple ("simple past") tense does not sound right for two reasons:

- It's never used when speaking, only in writing, and even then, only if you want to write a novel or something.

- This tense also refer to a one-off event. Like, one day at a particular time she said goodbye too many times in a row, or something. I would not assume a one-off event here.

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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If we're just trying to translate the literal meaning of this sentence from English to Latin, these are good answers. But I suspect that if we went back to ancient Rome and found someone experiencing the meaning behind these words (a guy talking about a girl who has said goodbye too many time, and he doesn't believe that it's going to be final this time either), the actual phrase he says may be completely different.…

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Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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I'm really sad at how much Latin I've managed to lose since my school days. It's really an incredible language and this stack exchange post shows some of that versatility. Because the words in Latin contain dense grammatical information in their spelling, you can be much more flexible with word order. This gives classical poets the ability to do crazy things with word ordering to create "word pictures" where the stru…

Incredible post, I really appreciate you taking the time to share. Are there any resources that you have enjoyed over the years for learning Latin or engaging in material written in Latin?

Latin has a great introductory textbook called Lingua Latina per se illustrata by Hans Ørberg. I only got through the first book, so I'm no expert, but this is the one everybody recommends. And it's really neat: there is no English in the book at all, it's all Latin from page one, building up from really simple words and grammar in a logical way.

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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I think you can achieve the same "compression" in other latin languages. In portuguese, you may be able to translate this as "despedira-se demais" or "despediu-se demais" (despediu-se = she said goodbye, despedira-se = pluperfect form of she said goodbye, demais = too many times).

Slavic too. In Polish: żegnała (she said goodbye) za często (literally too often, but used here it would convey the meaning and sound more natural than literal za wiele razy). BTW żegnała encodes the gender. If it was he it would be żegnał. So arguably it's more compressed than latin. BTW2 the real compression happens in conditionals żegnałaby = she would have said goodbye

Interesting, 'wiele' seems to be a distant cousin to the dutch 'veel' by way of 'viele' (German). More so because 'w' is pronounced as 'v'.

Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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Now "totiēns valedīxit" is quite a bit shorter than the English original.

I was hoping our friends on StackExchange could have found a Latin equivalent that fits the number of syllables of the English version, or it won't help if the original translation request was motivated by an upcoming Latin karaoke... not that machine translation was any better.

Dixit Google Translatum:

  Tam altus eram, non agnovi
  Ignis ardens in oculis eius
  Chaos gubernans mentem meam
  Vale quod illa surrexit in planum susurrabant
  Numquam iterum redi, sed semper in corde meo, heu
  Hic amor accepit portorium in me
  Dixit etiam multis temporibus ante vale
  Et cor eius breakin 'in conspectu oculorum meorum
  Et non optio
  'Fac tibi non vale ultra dicere'
  Whoa?
  Whoa?
  Whoa?
  Conatus sum optimum appetitum pascere
  Serva eam omni nocte venire
  Tam difficile est ut ei satisfiat, oh
  Tenentur ludens amore sicut erat sicut ludus
  Simulans idem
  Deinde conversus et iterum discede, sed uh-oh
  Hic amor accepit portorium in me
  Dixit etiam multis temporibus ante vale
  Et cor eius breakin 'in conspectu oculorum meorum
  Et non optio
  'Fac tibi non vale ultra dicere'
  Whoa?
  Whoa?
  Whoa?
  Fracta haec figam, alis fractis reparabo tuis
  Et fac omnia recte (saxum est, ita bene)
  Premuntur coxis tuis, ego digitos deprimo
  Omnis inch ex vobis
  Quia scio quod vis ut faciam
  Hic amor accepit portorium in me
  Dixit etiam multis temporibus ante vale
  Her breakin cor 'in conspectu oculorum meorum
  Et non optio
  'Fac tibi non vale ultra dicere'
  Hic amor accepit portorium in me
  Dixit etiam multis temporibus ante vale
  Et cor meum est breakin 'in conspectu oculorum meorum
  Et illa etiam pluries ante vale dixit
  Hic amor accepit portorium in me
  Dixit etiam multis temporibus ante vale
  Et cor eius breakin 'in conspectu oculorum meorum
  Et non optio
  'Fac tibi non vale ultra dicere'
EDIT: this automatic translation has so many errors, my late Latin teacher must just have turned in his grave.

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Re: How would you say “She said goodbye too many times before.” in Latin?

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If we're just trying to translate the literal meaning of this sentence from English to Latin, these are good answers. But I suspect that if we went back to ancient Rome and found someone experiencing the meaning behind these words (a guy talking about a girl who has said goodbye too many time, and he doesn't believe that it's going to be final this time either), the actual phrase he says may be completely different.…

The point you raise is one of the things most people -- professional translators, even -- get very, very wrong when translating (books, movie subtitles, game dialogue, you name it). "How do you say 'phrase' in [target language]?" is more often than not a much worse approach than "What would a native speaker of [target language] say if they found themselves in the same situation?".

    "What would a native speaker of [target language] 
    say if they found themselves in the same situation?". 
It gets even trickier if you are translating fiction. If you are translating, say, Japanese anime/manga with a Japanese setting for an English-speaking audience you don't necessarily want the characters to sound like Americans or Brits or Canadians or what have you.

So you may have to use language that Americans understand, but still make them sound Japanese. Somehow.

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