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It's an improvement because it cut out all the adverbs. The tone of the essay is an unmistakable virtue signal. It tries to correlate the virtue signal with quality improvement, which is either cringe or disingenuous.
Completely disagree that this is a form of virtue signaling; everything the article outlines is reflected in the major documentation style guides (e.g., MMoS or the Google developer documentation style guide). - Don't make unsubstantiated claims about your product. - Don't discuss upcoming features or refer to existing features as "new" outside of announcements/release notes. - Don't make promises about uptime or oth…
Some frameworks sell simplicity (setup, maintenance) as a feature, so that adverb would be fitting.
But this is just infantilizing and a lot of people (maybe a universal trait) are annoyed by that.