The post could have probably gotten the point across in less than 1/4 of the overall length (probably even less than 1/8th), instead the author wrapped the the post into lots of informalisms and a thinly veiled complained about academic publishing.
The result of this is reflected in the discussion here, nobody actually writes about the result/idea behind the post, instead we have ~200 comments discussing the merits of academic publishing vs blog posts and formal vs informal writing.
So I guess if you want to get your blog-post on the front page of HN it's a good writing style. If you want someone to consider and discuss the merits of your idea, maybe not so much.