Rule #1 of a release announcement: don't assume we already know what your product is . Every time you fail to give a 1-sentence elevator pitch in your blog post, hundreds of potential customers say "meh" and hit the back button, taking their thousands of friends, family and colleagues with them.
Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
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Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#22Another blog that talks about an ambiguously-named product and provides no links to or descriptions of said product. I had no idea what Cheddar was after a couple minutes of skimming the blog posts.
What's wrong with navigating to the product's homepage to learn more?
Here's the process I went through:
* Click HN link
* Okay, so what does this do? Click on Cheddar for Mac
* Great, known issues and a download link, but _what_ am I downloading? click "our blog" to go to blog front page
* Scroll through the most of the front page. I see open sourcing news, shirts and other stuff, but not what it does.
* Okay, I see a GitHub link. Let's go there.
* Top of the GitHub page has "Cheddar for iOS — Read more" still not helpful enough. Fine, I'll read more.
* Finally at the end of the first line: "a simple & instant task manager."
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#23Earlier quoted context omitted.
Right, it makes it "simple to organize your life" or something. It still doesn't tell me what it does in a meaningful fashion.
There's a video on the homepage that shows it in use. Showing something actually being used will resonate much better than stating a feature list.
I for one would prefer to at least read a couple of sentences that tell me what an app/service does before I have to watch a video, especially if I'm mobile at the time and/or it's hosted on Vimeo (great quality but looooong unforgiving buffer times in the UK)
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#24Another blog that talks about an ambiguously-named product and provides no links to or descriptions of said product. I had no idea what Cheddar was after a couple minutes of skimming the blog posts.
What's wrong with navigating to the product's homepage to learn more?
If you're talking about the "Cheddar" homepage, there isn't actually any navigation linking to it. If you're talking about "Cheddar for Mac"'s homepage, thats equally as ambiguous.
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#25Earlier quoted context omitted.
Right, it makes it "simple to organize your life" or something. It still doesn't tell me what it does in a meaningful fashion.
There's a video on the homepage that shows it in use. Showing something actually being used will resonate much better than stating a feature list.
They should focus more on the real time nature of the updates and why I should care if my ipad gets a update in real time when I make an change on my iphone. I'm sure there's some scenarios where real time is useful and even more so once they start supporting more platforms but users are unlikely to try and come up with these scenarios for long before they move along to something else.
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#26Earlier quoted context omitted.
What's wrong with navigating to the product's homepage to learn more?
That's the problem: You have to go to the homepage of the app and there isn't a link on the official apps blog page. Here's the process I went through: * Click HN link * Okay, so what does this do? Click on Cheddar for Mac * Great, known issues and a download link, but _what_ am I downloading? click "our blog" to go to blog front page * Scroll through the most of the front page. I see open sourcing news, shirts and o…
Different strokes for different folks.
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#27Rule #1 of a release announcement: don't assume we already know what your product is . Every time you fail to give a 1-sentence elevator pitch in your blog post, hundreds of potential customers say "meh" and hit the back button, taking their thousands of friends, family and colleagues with them.
What I have learned: * Cheddar is out for Mac * Cheddar is opensource for iOS * Sam is the creator of Cheddar * Archiving is not supported
What I have no learned: * What Cheddar is * Why I should care
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#28Another blog that talks about an ambiguously-named product and provides no links to or descriptions of said product. I had no idea what Cheddar was after a couple minutes of skimming the blog posts.
What's wrong with navigating to the product's homepage to learn more?
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#29Rule #1 of a release announcement: don't assume we already know what your product is . Every time you fail to give a 1-sentence elevator pitch in your blog post, hundreds of potential customers say "meh" and hit the back button, taking their thousands of friends, family and colleagues with them.
I was actually coming to HN to say the exact same thing. I assumed the link to "Cheddar" in the blog post would give me some information -- also assumed that the logo would take me a top page that would have information about the product. What I have learned: * Cheddar is out for Mac * Cheddar is opensource for iOS * Sam is the creator of Cheddar * Archiving is not supported What I have no learned: * What Cheddar is…
Anyone want to summarize those two points?
Re: Cheddar for Mac Public Beta
#30Earlier quoted context omitted.
That's the problem: You have to go to the homepage of the app and there isn't a link on the official apps blog page. Here's the process I went through: * Click HN link * Okay, so what does this do? Click on Cheddar for Mac * Great, known issues and a download link, but _what_ am I downloading? click "our blog" to go to blog front page * Scroll through the most of the front page. I see open sourcing news, shirts and o…
I can see how that can be quite cumbersome. I guess we just navigate websites in a different manner. Navigating to the homepage via the URL field is always my first instinct. Different strokes for different folks.
If you want me to use your product, you damn well better tell me what it is first.