Sorry, but the font and vaguely bolding are very, very off-putting. Especially when all but the last letter are bolded, or you have a link that includes the space after it, things start feeling wrong, somehow. What I did read also had a lot of rambling. That's not necessarily a bad thing in general, as it's a valid style and probably easier to get out there than trying to compress and perfect, but I'm not sure it's g…
I don't know if it was very, very off-putting, but I agree that the length of the piece together with the bolding made it harder to engage with the ideas. If the author is open to advice, mine would be this: 1. Consider your audience How might an audience of knowledgeable adults read into a piece that visually emphasizes every idea or phrase the author has decided is important? Might they feel that the piece is conde…
“Consider your audience” is good…but also not very actionable until you make your audience specific.