(Speaking from my experience as a calc teacher at a big U.S. state U.; mileage may vary elsewhere) Most non-STEM students won't see the 'Calculus I, Calculus II, Calculus III' that starts the essay so dramatically. Increasingly, liberal arts students are able to get by with no more than a "math appreciation" course and maybe what amounts to high school algebra. The "math appreciation" course might actually touch on v…
You sound like exactly the constituency Gil Strang's corrective essay is addressed to. I don't see any of the points you mention as particularly strong. There would be nothing wrong with presenting a more hands-on linear algebra course as a first course for freshmen. (Calling it "matrix arithmetic" does not do the notion service.) The material seems very immediate, and you can use a REPL like octave or matlab to rein…
It is ideal (and indeed, not uncommon) to have linear algebra and calc 1 in parallel --- for special honors classes. It wouldn't be realistic to do it for the general freshman class. Do you realize just how many students that includes, in a big state U.? "a REPL like octave or matlab" would be wonderful, amazing, if it weren't about as realistic as the space elevator. Do you know how many endless headaches there are with software-augmented courses, even when it's just software you run in the browser? I applaud your ambitiousness but let's just say I don't want to be in your shoes when you've just told a thousand 18-year-olds to install Matlab!
>the notion that calculus has had more impact on history/society
Linear algebra is hard to even put your hands on, historically. There was no Isaac Newton figure putting the finishing touches on an amazing breakthrough "Fundamental Theorem of Linear Algebra". It is the book-keeping field of mathematics. "All the numerical modeling that has been done using matrices" almost entirely arises by discretizing differential equations so linear algebra doesn't win any points there.