Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship • Hacker News Board

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

#11

Post by rxt » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:35 PM UTC

johnloeber wrote: post #6

Just fyi, you have a typo on your "What can I bring to your team?" page. You misspelled "radically" as "radicaly". Otherwise it looks great -- good going! Very impressive for a high-school student.

Also "databeses" in the "Experience with databeses" line.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by diimdeep » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:37 PM UTC

Personal Branding well done.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by thomasahle » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:41 PM UTC

I like the star graph in the bottom a lot :)

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by jonathanpoulter » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:43 PM UTC

From the page source:

Nice.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by pidg » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:45 PM UTC

rxt wrote: post #11

johnloeber wrote: post #6

Just fyi, you have a typo on your "What can I bring to your team?" page. You misspelled "radically" as "radicaly". Otherwise it looks great -- good going! Very impressive for a high-school student.

Also "databeses" in the "Experience with databeses" line.

Databese should be an alternate term for big data.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by Bahamut » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:47 PM UTC

You should remove the word "with" from those titles - the bullet points don't flow properly when appended to the titles

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by karnajani » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:47 PM UTC

This is awesome. I'm not in CA, but I hope a team over there picks you up.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by danielvinson » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:50 PM UTC

FYI in the US it is considered inappropriate to have your picture on a resume.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by Raphmedia » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:50 PM UTC

This is better than the websites of half the web agencies out there.

Re: Take me as an Intern – 19yo student seeking internship

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Post by tdsamardzhiev » Wed, Apr 29, 2015, 2:52 PM UTC

johnloeber wrote: post #6

Just fyi, you have a typo on your "What can I bring to your team?" page. You misspelled "radically" as "radicaly". Otherwise it looks great -- good going! Very impressive for a high-school student.

Also it should be "special prize", not "special price".

And yeah, I do feel kinda awkward criticizing such a beautiful portfolio for its grammar :)