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How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal

My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result.

Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result. Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

Why is "excess" needed there? "Eschew verbiage" seems a better fit to its own guideline. "Verbiage" means "speech or writing that uses too many words or excessively technical expressions" so the original is something like "avoid an excess of too many words."

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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post #12

"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result. Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

Why is "excess" needed there? "Eschew verbiage" seems a better fit to its own guideline. "Verbiage" means "speech or writing that uses too many words or excessively technical expressions" so the original is something like "avoid an excess of too many words."

I think the phrasing was purposefully self-ironic, but in the sense of excessively technical expressions rather than having too many words.

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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post #12

"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result. Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

Why is "excess" needed there? "Eschew verbiage" seems a better fit to its own guideline. "Verbiage" means "speech or writing that uses too many words or excessively technical expressions" so the original is something like "avoid an excess of too many words."

"Be brief."

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

#16

"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result. Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

The most eye-opening thing I've did in that regard is participate in a "microfiction" contest related to an online game, that had you tell complete stories in exactly 55 words, with a (vague) predetermined theme.

It's truly amazing what you can do with so few words.

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

#18
>Using big words not only improved your grade, it also took up space, getting you closer to the critical 5 page minimum.

I have to disagree with this point. Using "big words" (or "fancy vocabulary words"), often makes it difficult to reach the minimum word or page count. "plant that emerges from its seed with a singular leaf" for example, is 40 characters (9 words) longer than "monocotyledon".

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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post #16

"I am sorry I have had to write you such a long letter, but I did not have time to write you a short one" -- Blaise Pascal My writing was also ruined by highschool English rewarding large word counts and overblown language. Twitter has completely broken me of the habit, and my writing is far clearer and punchier as a result. Eschew excess verbiage and all that.

The most eye-opening thing I've did in that regard is participate in a "microfiction" contest related to an online game, that had you tell complete stories in exactly 55 words, with a (vague) predetermined theme. It's truly amazing what you can do with so few words.

I'd love to read some of these, got a link?

Re: How High School English Class Ruined Your Proposals

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post #18

>Using big words not only improved your grade, it also took up space, getting you closer to the critical 5 page minimum. I have to disagree with this point. Using "big words" (or "fancy vocabulary words"), often makes it difficult to reach the minimum word or page count. "plant that emerges from its seed with a singular leaf" for example, is 40 characters (9 words) longer than "monocotyledon".

The trick is to include both the big word and then the explanation of said word into the essay.
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