EBook - programmer to physical product business owner

Post by orangethirty » Fri, Oct 19, 2012, 12:29 AM UTC

amiheines wrote: post #8

orangethirty wrote: post #7

I took the liberty of re-writing the ad. Do and A/B test. Develop a passive income startup without disrupting your life. Developers. Are you frustrated with your day job? If so, allow me to share my experience with doggy-tag. A startup I started developing some months ago. Like you, I did not know where to begin . Hi, I'm Ami Heines. A 42 years old software developer. I created this page to tell you about a book I'm…

Virtual hug to you! This is a great version of the ad, thank you thank you thank you! Only rule violated in this version is that it refers too much to ME and too little to YOU the reader. I thought it's best to talk about 'what's in it for me' as the reader tends to be less interested in what I accomplished and more anout himself. I will definitely use A/B testing using a version of the page based on your suggestion.

Post by orangethirty » Sat, Oct 20, 2012, 10:00 PM UTC

amiheines wrote: post #13

orangethirty wrote: post #12

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Only rule violated in this version is that it refers too much to ME and too little to YOU the reader. I knew that would be your only criticism against it. But test it as I wrote it, please. Let's challenge your reader hypothesis.

I got your version up and ready for A/B testing today! Can you please submit the site in a new post to HN? I'm too new here and don't want to post my own web site here. I promise to write a blog post on the results, this will be fun! Perhaps we can finally debunk one rule about writing sales letters.