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Steps to Improve Your Writing

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Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

#11

To me, the hardest part of writing is getting the first draft done. I'm a good enough self critic to do a reasonable job of editing, but the writer's block is real and awful. The standard advice is to silence the internal critic and write. Of course, it's easier said than done. I'm supposed to be writing a paper. I'm commenting on HN instead.

Start with a mind map.

If the goal of your writing is clear, it's easy to make an outline once the mind map is done. If the goal isn't clear, start asking questions about why it isn't clear and expand the mind map until there's enough there to continue. Sometimes this requires research while constructing the mind map, especially for assigned academic writing. Tag pages with sticky notes or copy data with references into a large research doc as you go.

Once the outline is done, the rest is straightforward. An editor always helps if you can afford one, but you don't always need to agree with the suggested changes.

Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

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As a non native english-speaker, my struggles in my original language is finishing sentences early instead doing long ones. Sometimes I write long phrases, full of commas, semicolons, etc. I found that in enlish people tend to be more conservative when writing sentences.

Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

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post #8

Some good tips, but I read the section on nominalisation three times and I can't for the life of me tell you what nominalisation means or how to apply it (or not). However, it piqued my interest in the concept, and this article helped me get a little closer: https://unilearning.uow.edu.au/academic/3b.html

Pinker writes a useful explanation:

> A process called nominalization takes a perfectly spry verb and embalms it into a lifeless noun by adding a suffix like –ance, –ment, or –ation. Instead of affirming an idea, you effect its affirmation; rather than postponing something, you implement a postponement. Helen Sword calls them "zombie nouns" because they lumber across the scene without a conscious agent directing their motion.[0]

There is a lot more detail in his book "Sense of Style: The Thinking Person's Guide to Writing in the 21st Century"

[0]: https://stevenpinker.com/files/pinker/files/why_academics_st...

Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

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To me, the hardest part of writing is getting the first draft done. I'm a good enough self critic to do a reasonable job of editing, but the writer's block is real and awful. The standard advice is to silence the internal critic and write. Of course, it's easier said than done. I'm supposed to be writing a paper. I'm commenting on HN instead.

I always think about the reader: what do I want them to learn or understand? Then, how can I best get there without losing their attention, and, if context allows, make it entertaining.

Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

#15

This is clear writing? 2. Because we know nothing about the local conditions, we could not determine how effectively the committee had allocated funds to areas that need the most assistance. We can't tell if the committee spent wisely because we don't know our way around here.

Your version shows the problem with taking advice to "omit needless words" too far. The main virtue of good writing is clarity, and that often needs more words than a maximally compressed sentence. Your version omits useful information, is imprecise, and uses a vague idiom that is easily misinterpreted. In short, it doesn't say the same thing.

Re: Steps to Improve Your Writing

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Hi everyone, OP here. Writing has always been a struggle for me. I just started to post consistently on this blog two weeks ago. Didn't expect this to get to the front page of HN. I hope you guys find it helpful. I'd appreciate any feedback or comment on the post!

P.S: Fixed all the grammatical errors in the post.

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