I need some feedback from someone who can give me good feedback on my online marketing Platform I've been working on. Any takers? Maybe we could strike a partnership and build this platform together as like cofounders. If you want instant access go here: overviewmarketingsolutions dot com. I really need some high quality feedback to make sure I am going the right way. Thanks in advance please tell me what you think I've been working really hard on it.
Does anyone want to give me some feedback?
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Re: Does anyone want to give me some feedback?
#21st impression: Bad grammar/spelling. None of the apostrophies on the front page belong there. Eg. "Policy's" is spelled "policies". Then the 2 above that would be with an "s" at the end of the word, without the ' before them.
It could be clearer what exactly you're offering. I'm left to wonder if I'd get access to all my dashboards scattered across the web. I don't see why I'd need you whenn I already have all these other elements giving me data on my efforts. All I know from your site is that I'd get everything I need in 1 place, & that I have to pay $1 to see if you've got it organized in a useful manner.
One good thing I noticed was flawless rendering on my BlackBerry, which apparently is a challenge for many.
There's mention on HN somewhere about a website that gives you feedback on your site when you give feedback on someoneelse's site. A 1:1 trade. Don't remember what it was, maybe "Critique" or something. May be worth checking out.
Best of luck!
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#31st impression: Bad grammar/spelling. None of the apostrophies on the front page belong there. Eg. "Policy's" is spelled "policies". Then the 2 above that would be with an "s" at the end of the word, without the ' before them. It could be clearer what exactly you're offering. I'm left to wonder if I'd get access to all my dashboards scattered across the web. I don't see why I'd need you whenn I already have all these…
Thank you for the insight will correct the grammar and spelling mistakes.
Re: Does anyone want to give me some feedback?
#4tried to sign up for demo. didn't work. can you pls fix it?
Re: Does anyone want to give me some feedback?
#5tried to sign up for demo. didn't work. can you pls fix it?