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Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

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Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#3
Assuming you appreciate some constructive criticism - the sample 'business card' you provided doesn't match your promise of being elegant...

The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropped too closely and there's a pixelated border.

The font that 'CIVILIZED AGE' is written in hardly looks elegant, and doesn't match the cursive font.

Just my opinion...

Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#5
post #3

Assuming you appreciate some constructive criticism - the sample 'business card' you provided doesn't match your promise of being elegant... The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropp…

I agree with all of this feedback but I think it's the cursive font (Tangerine) that needs to change.

Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#7
Can't cut and paste it easily. Audrey's entry in my list of potential recruits would end up as her name and a short, bad tempered note. Compare it to linkedin's profile where I can grab key information easily (fairly easily - I imagine spreadsheet types get upset).

Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#8
post #3

Assuming you appreciate some constructive criticism - the sample 'business card' you provided doesn't match your promise of being elegant... The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropp…

I agree with all of this feedback but I think it's the cursive font (Tangerine) that needs to change.

It's a combination of that and the overuse of drop shadows, which give it the "I just discovered Photoshop" look.

Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#9
I would highly recommend that instead of making this a web app, you turn it into a theme of some sort. Most people will not want ANOTHER profile on ANOTHER domain. But, many people do still want to have their own domain.

Make it easy for me to direct my dns at you, and then it makes more sense for me as a user.

Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age

#10
post #8

Earlier quoted context omitted.

I agree with all of this feedback but I think it's the cursive font (Tangerine) that needs to change.

It's a combination of that and the overuse of drop shadows, which give it the "I just discovered Photoshop" look.

Aw, but I LOVE drop-shadow and cursive! :)

I appreciate the feedback, guys; this project was just a 48-hour diversion which I figured had stand-alone merit, but I'll be sure to take your comments to heart vis-a-vis my other work.

Thanks!

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