I have followed a similar path in other technical subjects, and have authored a couple of books on those journeys. I look forward to reading yours.
Some people have brought up style and structure issues with your book.. try to take this in stride. Writing for publication is its own whole thing, and involves a lot more than just putting ideas to print. Creating text that conveys the spirit, personality, and information that you want it to is nontrivial, and it takes time and practice to master. It’s easy, as a reader, to feel the rough spots in a literary work… but that does not mean that the reader would do any better when confronted with writing a book level tome, so hear the critique but don’t overthink the critic.
Even though writing well was a side quest to my otherwise very technical focus, I found a joy in developing my literary voice… and I would encourage you to keep uncovering yours.
Don’t be bullied into writing “correctly”. If you want to ponder the senselessness of life you can read one of millions of “correctly” written papers that will have you wanting to end it all just so you don’t have to go on. In these informative but wasted pages you won’t find a shred of the author, and only find yourself bored by the subject that so enthralled them to spend a thousand hours or more writing about it. What a wasted opportunity. They became so focused on writing correctly that they lost their voice entirely. Their writing may inform, but it will rarely inspire.
In these little bits of your writing I have skimmed so far, there’s plenty of warts but I feel you in the work. Your passion is contagious, and I am encouraged to learn. Sure, work out the warts, but don’t be bullied into writing “correctly” by sticking to formality and convention.
Writing is about informing, inspiring, and guiding the frame of mind of the reader. Your work does that because your voice shines through. Sure, it could be easier to read, sometimes clearer, and you should work on that if you want to, but don’t sacrifice your voice in the process. The best written work has a definite personal opinion on how to write a voice, and it’s usually not the “correct” way.
Humans writing like humans is what makes writing worthwhile in the third industrial age. Frolic in your humanity and keep up the good work. Don’t let the well intentioned bastards keep you down, especially if they have a point.