Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age
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Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age
#2Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age
#3The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropped too closely and there's a pixelated border.
The font that 'CIVILIZED AGE' is written in hardly looks elegant, and doesn't match the cursive font.
Just my opinion...
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#5Assuming you appreciate some constructive criticism - the sample 'business card' you provided doesn't match your promise of being elegant... The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropp…
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#6"Sign in with Twitter". Looks like I can't use this service... nice..
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#7Re: Show HN: An elegant profile for a more civilized age
#8Assuming you appreciate some constructive criticism - the sample 'business card' you provided doesn't match your promise of being elegant... The flow of the text around the round image makes it hard to read. There's a mishmash of font sizes. 'Show all' displays so little new text, you might as well not hide it under the link. The summary is cut off mid-sentence and there's no way of expanding it. The picture is cropp…
I agree with all of this feedback but I think it's the cursive font (Tangerine) that needs to change.
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#9Make it easy for me to direct my dns at you, and then it makes more sense for me as a user.
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#10Earlier quoted context omitted.
I agree with all of this feedback but I think it's the cursive font (Tangerine) that needs to change.
It's a combination of that and the overuse of drop shadows, which give it the "I just discovered Photoshop" look.
I appreciate the feedback, guys; this project was just a 48-hour diversion which I figured had stand-alone merit, but I'll be sure to take your comments to heart vis-a-vis my other work.
Thanks!