Ask HN: Feedback on blogpost

I'm trying to get into regular blogging and I'd appreciate any feedback on my blog. Here is a sample blogpost:

http://www.tjbarbour.com/post/WhyFluentWins/

I'd love any feedback on the post or my blog in general. I'm mostly trying to be more active online to help in my job search for a remote position.

Thanks!

I'd seen the syntax before never realized it had a name.